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Friday, November 30, 2012

52,097 words: 30 Days: First Draft through Climax

Just finished the climax of this story for NaNoWriMo.   Something I've noticed, if you include a word like "climax" in the title or body of a blog post, you get a few more hits. No mystery there, eh.

Zoomed past 50,000 words on the 29th. My fingers got into a groove, and more than 3000 words flowed.

As stated earlier, all pretense to literary excellence was abandoned in this first draft.

But. It's done. In 30 days.

Haven't produced that much writing since my days at Bloomberg. And without an editor in the background, yelling for a new quote.

My husband got me a framed and mounted Certificate of Completion. He's the best a girl could ever want.

Sunday, November 25, 2012

Have abandoned the idea of literary excellence

NaNoWriMo's tag line is:

30 Days and Nights of Literary Abandon

For much of this month, I have edited my efforts as I go, ruthlessly cutting substandard words.

Somewhen recently, I abandoned the idea of literary excellence.

I'm pretty much just slapping words at the page. The manuscript has become the equivalent of a sketch in charcoal.  At times, a not very accomplished sketch in charcoal.

I am taking it on faith that there is a possibility that I will be able, later, to work this rough sketch as far in the direction of a refined oil painting as whatever talent I have will allow.

If I have any talent.

I'm wondering about that.

On the other hand. I can produce words.  Now have more than 40,000 words in the manuscript.

Aiming at that 50,000 before midnight on Friday.

Husband has been informed that it's his job to go get lunch every day this week.

Monday, November 19, 2012

NaNoWriMo: 3000 words behind

This is a blog about writing about Enlightenment developing via a life of adventure.

I just returned from a four-day trip, to teach a course of the Transcendental Meditation technique, arguably an activity that has everything to do with the development of Enlightenment.

In my excellent adventure, I fell behind in my writing.

My husband drove the two, five hour trips to Kansas City, where I've been teaching TM for seven and a half years (>250 trips during those years). And I wrote in the car, both ways. We stayed four days and three nights, and I wrote in the odd 10 minute spaces between various meetings, or shopping, or visits with friends.

We did this trip in about the shortest amount of time possible. And I still fell behind by about 3000 words.

I admit that when I'm at home, I have a rather flexible schedule. I now am REALLY impressed with anyone who accomplishes the NaNoWriMo goal and also has a full-time job. Whatever those people are doing, they are way ahead of me. More power to them. They're also probably way closer to Enlightenment than me....

Today is November 19. I have until November 30 to complete the 50,000 words.

I remain optimistic. Maybe that's an enlightened outlook?

Thursday, November 15, 2012

NaNoWriMo: No Idea if this will flow

NaNoWriMo: 50,000 words in 30 days = first draft of a novel

Being a perfectionist, I find a nagging worry that the scenes I keep throwing at the page (gotta get those 1666 words/day done) may end up producing -- just a series of scenes. Will they flow, keep the reader engaged from one scene to another, wanting to find out what happens next, all the way to the end? (oh, please, oh, please)

I read to my husband. He loves it. Of course, he has no bias, at all.

I take the, probably stupid, chance of reading to someone out of the family. My question: "Does it sound like a book? One you'd read off the bookstore shelf?"

I even offered to read a scene at my husband's birthday party. Yes, I did. Pity me, please.

Nobody took me up on my offer. My husband has very wise friends.

As a journalist, I'd produce 1666 words in a day, in a finished news piece, easy. Of course, when one has an editor yelling "where is that quote!" you find the way to locate the data, to fit into the sentences, to tell the news, to make the editor happy, to keep your job.

Now, I pick up a pen and notebook, during the 15 minute break in a performance. Or I sit down, open the computer and try to figure out what NEXT should I do to my protagonist, because I now realize there needs to be SOMETHING happen, before I can get her to that next important turning point.

It's harrying. It's exhilarating.

Wednesday, November 7, 2012

NaNoWriMo: Relentless flow of words

Day number 7, of 30, with a goal of 1650 words per day.

Without a detailed outline, I can't see how anyone would complete this task. Unless they're willing to accept filler and tangential musings, which if that's how someone is able to write their story--more power to them!

Me, I'm doing it the hard way (of course), and editing into a fairly cohesive manuscript as I go along.

My goal is to produce those 1650 words each day, since if I miss a day, then the next -- or some other day -- will have to be twice or thrice as productive.

Honestly, I find myself too often in the evening checking the word count, and going for one more sentence. Then checking again. And another sentence. How much closer to the goal?

For example, today, I feel like I've written a lot. But the page demands 660 more words.

Okay, I can go back to my outline, and see the next goal, so my characters better get cracking on this scene to fulfill that goal.

In my first story, there was a six-month period when I wrote nothing, because I had no idea of what I should write in order to get to the end.

In the end, I am assured, it simply comes down to putting one more word on the page. Just like walking through life, I'm guessing. One step at a time.