After several days of thought and debate (with my husband), it has become clear that Alexa is not a Princess, a Maiden, shy and/or self-absorbed.
Frankly, as I've written her -- particularly in the first part of the first novel -- Alexa is a boring ninny.
She gets better, at the right moments. But how she does that is not clear.
And, since Alexa is entrusted with a very important package, She Has Got to Change.
Actually, not so difficult. She just needs to take over the dynamic things that I assigned to other characters.
And become a, ta-daaa, a Mystic/Amazon!
Of course, that changes details and dynamics.
But that's part of the Second Draft.
That's me, sitting in front of the computer, chewing my nails, double-checking my notes.
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